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Reading the Fine Print

August 18th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips We have to read the fine print to understand our agreements. Why, however, is there fine print? I was reading through a contract document recently. I missed several things, just a couple of words buried in a 100-page document. I guess we call those things “the fine print.” Gotta’ read the fine […]

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Tags: Agreement · Clarity · Concepts · Reading · Respect · Writing

“Rising Junior:” Yet Another Headache

August 11th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips Common usage is incorrect, but, hey, what’s the problem? Yet another headache. My grandson is a “rising junior.” That means, and everyone in America understands this but me, that he is between his sophomore and junior years of high school. (And he’s 6’3″ tall which puts him far above me, but I […]

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Tags: Culture · Education · Knowledge · Language · Meaning · Reading · Writing

Listen to Me NOT dat-information

July 14th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips There is too much talk out there online. Companies should block that so people can read reliable sources. I know just the source for them. The Internet cost$ nothing. Well, a few dollars a month to Xfinity or someone or something, but really, the cost is nothing. I can access all sorts […]

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Tags: Analysis · Censorship · Information · Publishing · Teaching · Writing

PDF2IRL

June 23rd, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips Perhaps we have become a bit too smart for our own good. Time to swing the pendulum back to practical, in-real-life activities. Yet another pendulum swings back and forth. We are in the 21st century and harnessing the power or our brains and augmenting our brains with AI and all such marvelous […]

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Tags: Competence · Knowledge · Learning · Practice · Publishing · Writing

Chatbot Analysis and Longer Written Pieces

June 19th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips Chatbots can answer questions about written pieces. They can be good tools for feedback. I was recently testing several different chatbots to understand which performed better. I fed a 200-page document I wrote into each chatbot and asked them questions. There were several questions which all the chatbots failed to answer. The […]

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Tags: Artificial Intelligence · Communication · Mistakes · Tools · Writing

Better Human Writing and AI-Produced Writing

June 16th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips To use AI to write reports requires a person who can write well. Let’s use AI to write our reports or essays or deep research or whatever AI will write for us now. That’s not cheating, that’s using good tools … some disagree violently with that statement. The AI tools are quite […]

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Tags: Artificial Intelligence · Communication · Computing · Tools · Writing

A Deeper Test of Writing Using a Chatbot

June 12th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips A chatbot can be used to check a longer piece of writing for content. I was recently testing chatbots to determine if they could pull information from long pieces of writing. I attached an autobiography that was more than 200 pages long. I then asked the chatbots what seemed like obvious questions. […]

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Tags: Artificial Intelligence · Learning · Machine Learning · Review · Testing · Writing

Writing at Pulp Speed

June 2nd, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips I have been able to write drafts faster and with much higher quality than other writers I know. I have, unknowingly, been writing at “pulp speed.” I stumbled across this concept of writing at pulp speed recently. It came from a blog post by Dean Wesley Smith. Back in the old days […]

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Tags: Communication · Education · History · Journal · Learning · Stories · Writing

Useful and Helpful Software

May 5th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips Instead of wiggling around so we can call our efforts “AI,” let’s focus on useful and helpful software. Over a decade ago (yes, that long), I was working with a graduate student on their writing. They had difficulty describing their research to others. Their work was wonderful. They had developed a concept […]

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Tags: Artificial Intelligence · Concepts · People · Technology · User · Value · Writing

Feedback: Do You Mean?

April 17th, 2025 · No Comments

by Dwayne Phillips A simple tool for providing feedback to a writer. “Mary had a little lamb.” The above five-word phrase can be said at least ten different ways. It can be assigned at least ten different meanings. Which one did the writer intend? Now we come to providing feedback to a writer. Ask, “Do […]

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Tags: Agreement · Clarity · Communication · Learning · Writing